dark white sky

Emma's picture

 

 

from a dark white sky
you fell into
my snowy body
like sun

at the window of my
ice hotel from the

pools of your face.
i see them widening
like burst banks
of deep sky-brown.

i’m dreaming i like
the softnesses
of you,
your mouth hand-pink

in mine,
the stretches of fleece
that untundra me.
i tip

the stone cold nights
riverward to the fish
that sink to see me
shivering;

as opening elsewhere
like sunrise,

you bring out your flint
to unfurl me
in the blue orange flame
of your fire

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I like this - it makes me

Doksla Cabbs's picture

I like this - it makes me thirsty.

this is one of the best poems

action stations's picture

this is one of the best poems i've read for a long time

i really like this-

roisin_imprononcable's picture

i really like this- especially the word 'untundra'- lovely!

is untunra a real word

Erica 's picture

or did you invent it? if you invented it then you should know i like it a lot - it may be in my top ten
 
 

we all need a good

Niall OSullivan's picture

we all need a good untundraing from time to time
 
lovely stuff as always emma, great site too

niall- 'the greatest thing

Emma's picture

niall- 'the greatest thing since sliced swan'
ha